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Cherysh Furberg
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Children's Writers Group
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Writers of the Paranormal
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This WD group started by the editor of Children's Writer's & Illustrator's Market welcomes all who are interested in writing books/materials for young readers
Whether you write ghost stories, paranormal romance, fiction or non-fiction, if it's paranormal we want to talk about it!
Jessica,
Thank you so much for your opinion. It was very helpful. I see what you mean. It was very helpful with your example. Hopefully, I will be able to post a much better version soon. Thanks again.
One of the main difficulties with writing a story with rhythm or rhyme, is that you still have to tell the story thoroughly, and yet keep the rhythm or rhyme throughout. You are definitely having a difficult time with this. Because of that, the stor…
Jessica,
I am trying to go for rhythm. I just feel stuck. It keeps going towards rhyme. I see what you mean about the details, the age may be more appropriate for 5-8.
Cherysh,
Are you going for rhythm, rhyme, or neither? I can't really tell. I need to know before I comment further. I have advice for all, but I don't want to comment too much until I know which direction to go. I have lots of comments.
And, I see…
Guess you can tell I don't have any little ones. Mine are all grown.
Kids actually love the song, Cheryl. They play it on the Wiggles all the time:)
That song was my inspiration. I wanted to play on it. My 2 and 3 year old niece and nephews love that.
Thank you. I see what you mean. I felt there was something wrong, but I couldn't step back from it.
Cherish,
This reminds me of the rhyme below (you count backwards by five). I feel like you started off trying to rhyme or or use rhythm, but then changed your mind part of the way through. The first four sentences sound that way, but then you veer o…
I don't really know much about picture books but this seems scary to me! I don't know I'd want to read it to any 3 year olds!
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- About Me
- I currently have one finished children's book "A Crocodile and a Smile". I also have four other children's works-in-progress and one children's chapter book in progress. I hope to be a published author.
- What Do You Write?
- Fiction, Children's
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